demonuntildeath (demonuntildeath) wrote,

Okay, YAY, I finally got around to joining NationofEleven (my god I'm slow...hcolleen has only been telling me to for...what...thirteen months now?)

Also, while trying to write (trying being the very key word here) I came up with a drabble.

You are a better person than I will ever be.  You feel everything so fully and with all your heart.  When you are hurt, you cry.  When you are happy, you laugh.  And when you love, you love so fully that you can never pull away.  The scars on your heart may be wide and run deep, but it is only because you feel so deeply.  No other living soul could survive having such scars - not your eldest brother, not me.  You are a better person than all of us.  One day, you'll see that.  You'll look in the mirror and no longer see the beauty you despise, but the strength lying beneath it.  One day, you'll see.

It was originally intended for Wolfram Von Bielefield of Kyou Kara Maou...but as I finished those last lines I realized, except for the brother comment, the paragraph really fits Mukuro...

Though I don't know who exactly would be telling her this.  It's just too sentimental to come from Hiei.  

And even though I meant it for fanfiction, I like it as a small piece of writing.  It gave me a warm, cozy feeling, imagining someone might really say this to another. 
Tags: drabble

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